Wednesday, December 14, 2011

kindness poem by peyton richardson

Kindness speaks the words, Your heart could never speak.
Your beauty hold me up, And give me strength when I am weak.
The warmth of your protection, Brings peace to my heart.
You open up the doors, You show me where to start. Kindness is just great,  The total opposite of hate.
With this pleasant feeling I feel, I want to just cry for those who are ill.
Mrs. Oneal if you gave me an A, I would baffled and scream Hooray!.

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

descriptive paragraph

Although i got in trouble doing it, I had a great time climbing the landers theater.  Chase, Peter, and myself were all walking down Main Street late one afternoon when we got the bright idea to climb up on top of the Landers Theater, also our church.  Our Youth pastor Christian Baxter showed us how to get up there, you had to go through a bunch of obstacles to get there.  LIke you had to jump a fence then crawl up the side of a wall.  Anyways, we got up there.  We were all having a good time and enjoying ourselves when out of nowhere 3 police cars pulled up and told us we weren't supposed to be doing that stuff.  We told him we were very sorry and that it would never happen again.  He told us that the building was as old as the dirt under our feet. So it could have caved in at anytime.  Again we told him we were sorry, then he left.  We got lucky that time and no one was injured. 

Friday, October 21, 2011

Advertisement Analysis

           This paragraph is about a woman who is advertising for a proffesional makeup brand.  They use this pretty woman trying to persuade you to buy their makeup product.  There are many woman out there that look good, but could look even better with this makeup on.  This makeup will make you look good!

          This makeup brand's advertising aim is on women who may not particularly satisfied with their looks.  The purpose of the woman being in the advertisement is to symbolize that the makeup will enhance your looks.  It is inevitable in my opinion not to think the woman modeling the makeup is attractive.  She is also smiling and taking a picture of herself.  It is a known fact women only take pictures of themselves if they know they look good.  Although it is your own opinion if you think the makeup actually enhances her looks. 

         The tone of this of this advertisement is seductive.  The picture draws you in and gets your attention because the woman is so attractive and attention getting.  They have a prototype woman in there advertisement and hope that the other women think think that the modeling woman looks pretty and good and that the makeup is the cause. 

         This is why I think that the tone is seductive, and that the purpose is to sell the makeup to people out there by having a girl model their product.

Thursday, August 25, 2011

new post

They is my new post
I had surgery so I don't have a poem :(